I only read the last few parts of this but I thought it was 
very funny and usued the characrters in a way that 
Takehashi would have liked (specially the quote) on the 
other hand I don't like to think about that and ypu 
shouldn't either, nothing is on the roof.
I have two questions is there a web site for this and where 
is the story this is the sequel too? perhaps this is like 
Airplane 2 1/2 which was a sequel tto airplane 2 if they 
ever do Airplane 2. now to critize the story I felt this 
lacked dramatic impact for a dark fic and nobody died or 
was mamimed or other wise seriously harmed other than 
Akane's shock about Nabiki and Soun's if that potion ever 
wears off. No this was definitly one of the worst dark fics
I have ever read. I think I will go read a comedy like 
Poison just to lioghten things up after this.

Ruth Robinson

rik@cfanet.com