I wish this auther would specify if this is a parallel 
world or what?
I have only read one other iczer fanstory and no full 
vidoes(part of one) and this doesn't seem quite the world I 
remember. No background and no personal information on the 
characters. I think the writing was alright but the story 
didn't mean anything because I couldn't tell what or why 
anything was happening. I would suggest the author better 
write a synopsis of his story 
before posting part 5 and include it with the story. In 
fact a general background for the universe wouldn't be a 
bad idea.

E Robinson

rik@cfanet.com