First time I sent this it did'nt go trough but I really want 2 know if this
sucked or was so horrible that i should die and burn in hell. I know it's not
great but can u please read this. I want 2 know if it is okey 2 put up some
of my others stories and yes they R better. So even though this one sucked
others may come out that suck less.^_^
Tsunam
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Subj: Re: [FFML] [Ranma] STARLIGHT (revised) -Reply -Reply
Date: 97-06-03 19:29:27 EDT
From: Tsunam
To: fanfic@fanfic.com
Well I took what to had 2 say 2 heart and took his idea so this is just the
Ryugenzawa story rewritten.
An Akane to Remember
As a note up 2 this point the story is pretty much the same.
As the orochi arose from the water ranma reflected on what Ryoga had told
him earlier .
" No matter who she 's with I'll always love her "
<" All right from Akane's sake"> Ranma thought silently to himself.
Ranma looked back a little to see Akane and shinnosuke. He smiles slightly to
no one in particular. Then his face goes stern once more.
"Shinnosuke once I jump take akane and get out of here as fast as you can"
His face once more softning his eyes fighting back tears, he speaks silently
" Akane I hope your happy "
He turns looking straight into the eyes of the great orochi who is currently
pissed off.
No bothering to turn he speaks " Shinnosuke take care of her "
With that he leaps off to face his foe.
Akane whispers wordlessly "...ranma....". She prepares to leap after him but
is held down by shinnosuke. He looks stern and hard and speaks " no ".
Akane fights trying to pull away " I have to go to
him.......he's........he's........my fiance "
Shinnosuke holds his stern face and says nothng but stares deep in to her
eyes. Almost as if in a trance she holds her ground , if only for a second.
Just then we see ranma tired and losing hold and the orochi grabbing him
preparing to eat him. He stares down and looks at Akane one more time and
smiles and whispers softly " goodbye "
Akane in horror watches frozen as the orochi closes his mouth with ranma
still in there. He dives back down content with his meal. She collapse to her
knees remembering Ranma's face and his deep blue eyes staring........as
if...........straight through her . The images replays over and over again in
her mind .A small voice whispering softly " You never told him. Now he's gone
"
P-chan and Shinnosuke stand there not knowing what to do. Akane seemed
lost,unmoving ....just staring at the water. Shinnosuke finally gets the
nerve and slowly places his hand on her shoulder. She turns slightly to see
who it is then her eyes seem to build a fire and a hate.She grabs his
shoulder and pulls herself up pounding on his chest screaming" You should
have let me go! You should have let me go! " She screamed till her voice was
lost and she falls to her knees.
Shinnosuke places his hand to her cheek tears still streaming down her face
. He brings his hand up and pushes the bangs from her face. She speaks
softly,gently" I never told him.......never told him......that......that I
....l loved him" He looks in to her eyes and holds her and bring her close to
him and whispers in to her ear " Its okay. He did it for you for your
happiness." She stops him and stands " I can't....I can't find happiness
without him......not after what he's done. Not after finding such happiness
with him." She et urns and looks up and wonder if he sees her .
Shinnosuke goes to her and speaks once more " He would want you to be happy.
Don't let his sacrifice go to waste. I ...... I hope you can find happiness
once more. With us,me and my grandfather. Maybe one day we can kill the
orochi and avenge him "Akane looks up and thinks for a moment " Maybe.......ma
ybe I can. I think Ranma would like it that way"
She takes Shinnosuke's hand an walks past the now Ryoga ands Shin's
grandfather.
She knows a small part of her would never forget the love she once felt and
she would try not to but because of Ranma perhaps she can live again and find
a new love and a new happiness. She would never forget him and she would
never forget the sacrifice he did for her that day. Perhaps one day she will
see him and perhaps tell him what she could never say but for now she will
find a new happiness and love and a lesson to never take things for granted
and to try not to hide for in life the unexpected always happens and we never
know just might happen for tomorrow is always a new day.
In the distance we look up to the sky and see a young boy smiling down on the
person he would always love and remember and hope for her happiness.
FINE.
I know that was weird and pathetic but hey I did not think this out I just
sat down and wrote whatever . Not my best work. But this is the first I ever
posted. So give me C&C hell even flames if you want. Oh yeah I know the
spelling and grammar but hey who cares?
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