Mike Loader wrote:

<snip something to wash a CERTAIN other script fic's bad taste from my
mouth>

	EXCELLENT! I'm throughly amazed that a fic written in script could be
this entertaining, this detailed and this funny! I only wish my
nitpicking skills weren't so incredibly lax so I could give you more
worthwile C&C. Characters are right on top of where they should be,
given the current storyline, and tired old cliche's are not only avoided
but used for more humor. And even the "cliched fic parody" cliche is
being avoided! Incredible...and funny. I'll even forgive you for that
Ukyo crack (at least in my fic she DOES make it out alive) in your
trailer.  
	The only flaws and requests I have are... a slight OOC on Ranma's part
where he threatened Nabiki (though the resolution was done bueatifully)
One too many mentions of the Damned Cat. A more egsagerated german
accent on the estranded doctor (not to much though, I hate to not be
able to understand him) An explination on Kasumi's pork fetish. And I'd
like to know where the Old Ghoul is during all this.  

	Good job!

FFML: But what about <insert plot hole here>

Keener: It doesn't matter, it's just a funny show.


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