To highlight passages I liked from this story would be an exercise
in futility since I enjoyed the whole story.  Most lemon/lime writers
just find "excuses" to get lesbian scenes in their fics, but this actually
makes a lot of sense.  I wouldn't go as far as pairing up the other half
of the Knight Sabres, but still, this relationship has more promise
than the Silia/ Priss relationship in your other lemon fic.  You have a great
eye (or pen) for description and your sense of dialogue and characterization
is dead on.  I would enjoy seeing other fics from you someday, and even
better, they don't have to be lemons.


Foxtrot the Furryous, CBTFH, ret.