A well-written, rather reflective work. Peaceful. A nice change from the
drama/sadfic/action niche that Ranma fanfiction seems to have drifted
into.

Good use of description and movement to show the scene. It reminded me of
Palmer or Engman's works, both of whom are writers of the first water. For
a first post, not bad at all.

As a side note - the enjoyment of the rain is very understandable. It only
rains about 7 times a year, here, and we desert types quickly learn to
treasure them.

Hope to see more from the author. :)

- Mike Loader
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