At 17:31 14/05/97 -0400, you wrote:
karmin.stjean@the-spa.com wrote:
I had this idea for a Ryoga tale but so far all that's come to me is the
basic
outline:
1. Ryoga is mistakenly accused of raping Akane when she's found comatose
and
naked and bound with a bandanna.
2. The others are so angry at what happened to Akane that they drag
Ryoga to
Jusenkyo and throw him into Pool of Drowned Girl, removng his pig-curse and
giving him the girl-curse, then rape him as an act of revenge. (Note: Ryoga
gets pregnant.)
3. Ryoga is found to be innocent after all, but not until Akane finally
wakes
up seven months later.
4. Ryoga dies in childbirth.
Suggestions are very welcome.
That's.....quite a suggestion. The "darkfic" label would be a MUST for
this one. I think if everyone thought Ryouga raped Akane, they would
just kill him and be done with it. Not to mention you haven't explained
why Akane was naked and bound with a bandanna. I really don't like this
idea to be honest but if you're determined to write it, at least give us
fair warning and be prepared for a LOT of flames.
Perhaps, a toned down version would be more prudant. Ryouga is accused
of raping Akane and everyone tries to kill him. Ryouga must somehow
prove his innocence and bring the real rapist to justice while avoiding
the wrath of the town. Even then, it would be hard to pull off, but
this version would be more likely to work and be accepted than Ranma and
Co. raping female Ryouga for revenge and she dies with her baby. It
just doesn't fit with Ranma 1/2....
Nahhhh.... Too cliche. I mean, this is quite common in the movies and any
more stuff like this is going to make me bored.
Unless your intention was to simply shock the FFML which you've probably
already done. Maybe you meant to label this "Bulwer-Lytton" or "Top Ten
Ranma 1/2 Fics That Would Get You Tied and Feathered"?
I think this would be a great fic. Write it please!! And let the flames
come. They can't hurt you except perhaps your ego.^_^
Sincerely,
Megane 6.7
MT
martin.tie@virgin.net