I thought this was the funniest Kuno story I've ever read.  Wait a
minute...this is the only Kuno story I ever read.  You know, dear Tate-chan
can be quite a romantic cad if he wasn't so fixated on his glorified visions
of Akane and the pigtailed girl.

Keiichi was a dream, even for a Kuno.  Such a shame that not one girl was
swayed by his words...but then again, they all were probably turned off by
Tatewaki's poetry. Ah well.

Ranma-chan's new experience with her body was hilarious! It's good to see
Ranma's ego smacked by Mother Nature.  And by the way, you win the most
descriptive sentence award by using the words 'Ranma', 'bop', and 'jiggle'.
Being a girl myself, it still boggles my mind that we girls can 'bop and
jiggle', much less poor Ranma.  I don't know if Ranma would be flattered to
hear his girl side described so neatly, or if he'll beat you into a bloody pulp.

Poor Ryoga.  Why do I feel he'll benefit from Keiichi's teachings? That will
be a fun fanfic to write. And I like the way you ended him and Ukyo's scene:
he's looking at her....she's looking at him...Tsubasa's looking at her...

Okay, maybe Ranma may have technically won the match, but why do I feel that
Keiichi came out as a winner anyway?  Maybe I'm biased against Keiichi
because he's so cool (and dreamy...but let's not touch that).  I would love
to see more appearances of Keiichi in the future.  

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/===\     LaShawn M. Taylor (shonnie@zeus.anet-chi.com) 
|^ ^|\    "Hey! Where's the cream filling?!" -Hostess cupcake commercial
 \v/\|    "Life is such unutterable hell, solely because it is sometimes
    |\    beautiful..." -T.H. White "The Troll"
    \|    "You come with steam of breath and caligula's head
	  To me so lonesome and longing and so unsatisfied
	  Even with all this beauty flooding deep into my eyes."
				-Poi Dog Pondering
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