Twister wrote:

I can still reach my account! ^_^

Twister.

Good for you. now revise the twisted path's new chapter. 
 	There is an idea errors in the latter part of the fanfic. something
about a spell destroying another spell. it is difficult to understand
the way you write it.  

It exploded, disrupting the spell in the process and destroying both
in a bright burst of flame. He viewed his vanishing handiwork

both? what both? 

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I'm back to stay, I'm sad to say 
but I hope you have a verry nice day.
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