Hmm... interesting.

But the only comments that I can come up with are that it should be
"Okaasan" rather than "Okaasa"...

And about the way to "fix" Ranma as a girl.

If Ranma's stuck that way for 9 months, then he'll probably die of
pnemonia or something, seeing as he can't even touch hot water
without being burned. And I don't think that it's possible for him to
be turned into a male without him dying because of the burns.

So I'd probably change that to having Shampoo give Ranma some
water-proof soap that will actually work for the whole time he
wants to be a female. (Probably longer than 9 months, as Akane
wouldn't be able to feed the child...)

Oh, and it takes a months or so before Ranma would get morning sickness -
it doesn't happen straight away!

But other than that, it's not bad so far ... ^_^

Kun-chan...
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