Subject: Re: [FFML] [fanfic][beta] BGC/Ranma: The Circe Project part 9
From: jhedge@waterw.com (Jeanne Hedge)
Date: 5/3/1997, 9:48 PM
To: Nicholas Leifker <nwl9354@unix.tamu.edu>, Fanfic ML <fanfic@fanfic.com>

At 02:28 AM 5/3/97 -0500, Nicholas Leifker wrote:

Leifker presents...

The Circe Project

Part 9


and a 
young martial artist named Nodoka Hibiki (Ranma's grandkid) 

and obviously some relation to Ryouga as well...


Linna returns months later, having survived a dunk into the 
Nannichuan, as the final heir to the Niichieju (i.e. Chinese Amazon) 
school of martial arts, with her mentor Shampoo in tow.  

Gee... I sort of thought Shampoo had Linna in tow <g>



    The chair in the center seemed too large for him.  He was only 
eighteen, the youngest of all of the Sabers......
<snip>
    At that moment, Nene didn't want to be human.  Human beings poisoned 
the land, twisted nature's magic, and killed each other for petty greed.  
She had been a part of it for twenty years now, and she'd had enough.

Nene's 3 years older than Mackie.

  
    "Priss... stuff it."  She blinked; she hadn't expected him to hold 
his ground.  "Right now we've got a job to do, and we can't afford petty 
s*** like that."  He sighed, and relaxed slightly.  "For what it's worth, 
Sylia agreed with you, to an extent."  

s*** ?  In a BGC fic?  Come on, don't be shy.  Either use the word, or
don't, but don't do it this way.  It looks ridiculous.


    "What... you think I can't stay calm in a battle situation?"  Priss 
looked ready to storm out of the room.

No    ^_^



    She remembered the first night she had waited like this.  She had 
been a slim girl of seventeen then; only four years ago, but to her, 
lifetimes.  Glenn, her boyfriend, had been agitated for several days about 
something, but it would be months before she found out all the details.  
He had said he would be home by eleven; she'd waited patiently for him to 
come.  By midnight, the tears had soaked into her pillow.  At dawn, the 
call had come to identify his body.

Priss was on the scene when he died.  So was Leon.  (ref: Asu e Touchdown
video, in Hurricane Live: 2032)



Hope to see part 10 some time soon  ^_^


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