Greetings.
Just another Dirty Pair story. I love it!
The Dirty Pair was first anime, i stumbled over, when i start
surf the Net. It was before i had seen any anime series
at all. All my info of Pair is from Net - www pages and
wonderful fanfictions.
Also this possibly will give me more strength
to wrote next parts of my own Dp fic "From the Unknown"
Here is my comments. No corrections - Sean's english is
definitely better that my one.
gaffney@iconn.net wrote:
NOTE: This story takes place between the Dark Horse stories
_Sim Hell_and _Fatal But Not Serious_.
Hmm, im not familiar with these? What was into them?
May i ask synopsis into one sentence? Is it unrealated with
story, or there is some key events?
DeFeo began to look concerned. "I hope we haven't succeeded in
trashing your memories. Shasti, this was before the LaCombe incident.
When you were part of the best team in the 3WA, the Ultimas. Does any
of this mean anything to you?"
So the LaCombe shutting off was a damage to her brain?
I think, becayse she tended to remember that fact in 'Reunions'.
She tended to remember it in "101E", despite WWWA attempts
to clear it out. Wonder, now it was a fault, or some get ordered
'to do a slip'.
Cory Emerson was livid. She'd been this close to pulling off the story
that could make her career, only to be ambushed by two 3WA goons and
spirited off. She attempted to mention something about kidnapping and
assault, but the goons simply said that the Central Computer had
authorized them to use any means necessary to bring her to Pacifica.
Im puzzled about the planet, where the WWWA headquarters was
located. Was it Pacifica planet, Elenore city? Or Elenore planet?
Also the way, the CC demanded something. It sounded
like the medieval tyrant order, not the request.
Cory's eyes narrowed. She'd never quite been able to accept the fact
that the agents sent off to die for the 3WA were chosen by a computer
instead of a human. Sure, she used computers every day, and had her
cyberplug, but when the chips were down, she wanted the decisions to
be made by someone with experience, rather than a machine sifting
through probabilities.
Good said.
Daltrey spoke in almost a monotone. "You already know my feelings on
this matter. To be trusting such delicate information with a reporter,
particularly this one, is incredibly dangerous. I cannot predict what
sort of effect she'll have on Shasti."
Speech like one from robot.
Somehow he sounded more dangerous that Shasti.
Some premonition of what will happen...
That was the key, though, she thought to herself. The 3WA had never
thought of Shasti as a person. They saw her as a tool, to experiment
on and play games with, trying to coax an agent out of an empty shell.
Another good statement. But the ones who sit in high
places, tend to forget about it much more, that usually.
Shasti stumbled back into the room they'd given her, attempting to
hold herself together. It wasn't easy. DeFeo had told her that her
personalities weren't removed, but made a part of her. Shasti
certainly believed that right now. Part of her was yelling to put
herself together, another was still bawling over Deirdre's death and
her part in it, still another was wondering why Kei and Yuri hadn't
heard about her capture, and there was a small part that noticed that
the 3WA uniforms had gotten a lot skimpier recently.
All the personalities back and in one time.
Thats a lot of pain.
Daltrey turned. "She's a security risk. She knows far more about
Shasti than we ever planned to give the press. She's become a
detriment."
DeFeo was livid. "Now you listen here, Mister. You are going to find
Shasti and Cory, and then we are going to finish the job that we set
out to do. Then we will let her go. There will be no arguments."
"She is a security risk, Mr. DeFeo. She's a risk to the 3WA. Are you
willing to endanger the organization all for the sake of one rogue
agent?"
DeFeo suddenly looked very tired. "Yes. Yes, I am."
Suddenly Daltrey smiled. "Thank you, Mr. DeFeo, that's all I wanted to
hear." There was a movement to the side, and when DeFeo turned, he was
blown apart by a plasma rifle at close range. His body evaporated.
Damn. A wery quick way of dealing. With such an
attitude, WWWA will soon remain without agents. ;-)
Hmm. It looks, that into WWWA had developed something
even more dangerous thah LaCombe-Shasti combination. Wonder, how
the CC overlooked it. Or is it the first signs of what will
later turn into what was described into Ryan Mathew's
"Lovely Angels Forever"?
--yes, there's an explanation for Deirdre's behavior in Part 2... :-)
Let me guess - rewrite of memories, saved from her
dying brain, into computer. Body grown up into biotank.
Special agent with one target - destroy Shasti.
Wonder, if the memory restore will work for her.
--no, Part 2 isn't written yet...
Im waiting with impatience.
Aivars
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