Subject: Re: [FFML] [C&C] SM/Ranma: Reunion War
From: RTeker@aol.com
Date: 4/21/1997, 2:59 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

Need to work on punctuation/grammar a little, but then don't we all?
Also: Osaka, last I checked, was a city all by itself, separate from 
Tokyo. Depending on who you ask, the cast of Sailormoon live either 
in Juuban-ku or Minato-ku.
  
I never knew exactlly were the SM cast lived at.

By the way, this puzzles me: Exactly why is Ikuko-san (or whatever 
you want to call Usagi's mother) call someone to watch out for Usagi? 
I mean, I can kinda understand this with all the monster attacks 
around and stuff, but...oh, well, nevermind.

I figured that Serena's mom has heard how well Ranma has defended and saved
Akane so many time, she thought that since Ranma's family, he would do the
same for Serena.

Anou...blue? Every time I looked, Michiru's hair was sea-green...

Some have said Aqua-blue and some have said Sea-green.  I just flipped a coin
to decide which one to use

Interesting point here: Which Queen Serenity? Serenity of the Silver 
Millenium, or Neo Queen Serenity? Just a thought.

Queen Serenity of the Silver Millenium

This is one point that always puzzles me. Now, I have embarrassingly 
little knowledge of the Ranma manga. I've heard about/read 
translations of many of the stories, but I still know a lot less than 
I'd like to. Now, all the evidence I have suggests that the Neko-ken 
incident happened when Ranma was six, however, I have also seen many 
times fanfic authors cite it as having happened when he was ten. 
Which is correct?

I based the age on what was said in the Video (Never read the Manga).

Real quick nitpick here: Pluto wouldn't grin. Pluto hardly ever even 
cracks a smile. Pluto is almost as bad as most Vulcans when it comes 
to expressing emotions.

I've heard she does smile sometimes.

As for the grammer; hey i'm working on it.
here's a teaser for SMRW part 4

Sailor Moon Reunion War


Chapter 4 (teaser)
The Reemergence


     As every one continued to look some what confused over what had just
happened to them Susan just stood in the center of the room, and waited 
for everyone to calm themselves a bit.  She noticed with a bit of surprise
that Ranma and Akane actual looked rather calm for what had just happened to
them a short while ago.  The looks she was getting from some of the other scouts
however were not so pleasant.
     Oh well better get on with it before they get to upset' she thought to herself.
"As you all know by now", started Susan looking at Akane and Ranma, "we all
lived long ago in a place called the Moon Kingdom.  Which was about 1,000 years
ago.  This period was called the Silver Millennium because all the planets were at
peace, and joy rang out throughout the universe.  This peace and happiness continued
until the Negaverse showed up and destroyed the moon kingdom.  It was thought
for a time that the Negaverse would never be able to locate us and  cause us any
trouble, but in the end one of our own betrayed us to them.  The traitor was
banished from the kingdom, while his children were allowed to stay. After we had
found out about this betrayal it was just a matter of hours after it that the Negaverse
attacked and destroyed the 5th planet immediately, and creating the asteroid belt,
before attacking the moon it self.