Just so you won't think that your 'fic got _entirely_ ignored in
the wake of 'Bitter End'....
eep!
You've disappointed a lot of people by not writing the
Saotome/Hibiki bout, but considering the trouble I have with fight scenes
I won't complain. Now when will their daughters go head up?
Two points about the backstory. I've already re-read the prequel,
but I have yet to understand what in the sam hill Mako-chan has against
Priss?
And secondly... I don't think Zen, let alone Blade, will
appriciate it when you explain the actual fates of Akane and Ukyo (from
the first scene I thought Ranma was misdirecting his anger towards General
Pu, but I did not realize how sordid things were)
The Pair "escort" Serenity off planet? Them and what army?
A ressurection? Sounds Fun!
HTG