At 01:39 PM 2/23/97 -0500, you wrote:

tenchiken wrote:
a nice image for the setting.

Good, trimming out the irrelivent but setting the mood for the main
point.

The entire court looked stunned, and Seriyou's face twisted as he attempted
to decipher the kings move. "Truly killing two birds with one stone" The
king thought. The Courier brought a written copy of his proclamation, and
with a long, exaggerated stroke of the pen, Azusa set forth his plan. As
with all great villains, he then unleashed a sinister laugh, which echoed
throughout the Chambers.

"Too much Sake, Misaki whispered to Funaho..."

Lighten the mood why don't ya. personally I would have left without the
comment.

Oh Wait, it will get dark,........ DARK!!!! BWAHAHAHAHAHA (* See what
happens when I have three papers and two exams, and two speches in two
weeks ;_)

Aeka was in her room, in front of her sat a brand new Jurai battle uniform.
Tenchi was about to turn 19, and by Jurain Custom, was now a man. Another
custom was that, at the age of 19, a Jurain man would be given a suit of
armor from the one who loved him most. "Surely I lov. . . . " Aeka's
thought was cut short, as she heard Sasami rolling & Muttering in the bed
next to her.

A basis for a good duspute between the girls. 

I want to plant thoose seeds now. 

Aeka noticed that Sasami was shivering. Aeka quickly grabbed a blanket, and
covered Sasami. "Sasami can sometimes have prophetic dreams," Aeka thought.
"I wonder if I should wake her."

Nice of you to include that spoiler information within the story.

Oh! Don't read this if you arn't a tenchi buff.

Anyone who wants part3, mail tenchiken-story@narf.com, it will be done by fri.
	-TenchiKen