Date:          Sat, 22 Feb 1997 00:17:02 -0800
From:          Redneck Gaijin <redneck@jurai.net>
Reply-to:      redneck@jurai.net
To:            Bob Schroeck <rms@cnj.digex.net>
Cc:            fanfic@fanfic.com
Subject:       Re: [FFML] [TEASER] Ecchi 1/2

Bob Schroeck wrote:

*THUD*

      Akane put away her hammer, and went back into the house, her pie
revenged upon.  Ranma sprawled across the living room, wheezing out
'kawaiikune' as if it were his last breath.  Shampoo, in the doorway to
the backyard, shook her head.  "Why do I feel like I'm in a bad remake
of 'The Taming of the Shrew'?"
      Kasumi shrugged, and held up a bottle of tanning oil to Shampoo.  "I
dunno.  Look, do my back?"

I like.  Redneck, pay this guy a royalty and use this.

Well, I'd do the same scene a bit differently...

*BOKUN!!*

Akane walked away, fuming at the waste of a perfectly good pie, to say
nothing of a perfectly good mallet. How dare that baka insult her
cooking that way- he didn't even -taste- it before throwing it out the
window.

Outside, Shampoo stood, naked and dripping with blueberry creme. "This
was most definitely -not- in the plan," she muttered to herself.

Kasumi walked by in her customary tanning G-string and smiled. "Shampoo!
Why, I didn't know you were into food!" She licked her lips slowly and
added, "That looks like fun. Mind if I have a taste?"

Shampoo stumbled a step or two back. "Get away from me, you insatiable
slut..."

"Aw, c'mon," Kasumi chuckled, "at least let me clean you off..."

Shampoo stepped back, and back again, as Kasumi closed in for the
kill... and about that time the stones lining the koi pont found the
back of Shampoo's heel.

*SPLASH!!!*

Shampoo-neko crawled out of the water, shaking the excess from her fur.
At least, in this form, she was safe from Kasumi...

"Aw, how darling," Kasumi cooed. "C'mere, kitty, let me give you a nice
-hot- bath. I might even join you." 

Inside the house, Ranma heard the gut-wrenching howl of a terrified
feline. Outside, he heard Kasumi's voice calling, "Come back! I want to
take you to my room and play dress-up! And we can play with all my toys!
Aw, c'mon..."

Ranma reached for his algebra book and dove in to his homework. I do
-not- want to know, I do -not- want to know, I do -not- want to know...

----

...something like that. };-{D

Redneck

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