Someone gave some valid comments about my fics, that they may be a
little too short.... In his words, they read like "Reader's Digest"
pieces. I'd like to disagree, but I do see he does have a point. "Life and
Manhood" as well as "Waking" were rather short.... (Of course, I _am_
still building a continuation fic based on those...though it is on hold
right now.) Anyway--is this guy right? Do my stories seem to jump too
quickly to a conclusion? Should I pull the plots out a little longer?
(Io5CaD is not among those I'm talking about, though. And VN isn't really
plot oriented anyways, so that doesn't really count either.) Any thoughts?

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