From: davidrow.ryoohki@pop3.hiway.co.uk

It will involve the `Ah! My Goddess' universe, and a few others.. :-)

Oh good, I'm an AMG fan

Although its rather darker than the usual fic's set in AMS 

Meta-Matics is dark. Let's see how you measure up.

(er, the revengefic thing isn't still running, is it...???)

It could flare up again at any moment.

The <name?> temple, a crisp early November morning.

It's the Tarikihonganji temple, but it's almost never refered to by name.
Just saying "the temple" is enough.

The scene pans slowly left-to-right, then zooms inwards, showing us the 

interior of a kitchen. This is currently occupied by four people; two 
women, a girl, and a man.<<

The description following this is wrong. The kitchen does not have a tv nor
a table. those are in the living room. They do not eat in the kitchen.
There are many scenes showing the kitchen and the living room in the manga
and anime.

"Bell-chan! Are you OK?"

Keiichi would NEVER call her that, especially in front of her sisters.

"I'm sorry, Keiichi-kun, the cup was slipery with soap and I dropped 
it. I wasn't paying attention and it startled me."

2 things. Belldandy uses Keiichi-san, not Keiichi-kun. Next, Belldandy
would never lie. Maybe it's not a strict rule, but it's one she takes
seriously.

Keiichi smiled, and stretched upward slightly to kiss 
Belldandy gently on the cheek.

This would get a rather rude interruption from Skuld.

Belldandy looked up at her sisters' worried faces.

"That's why I wanted to make sure Keiichi was gone, if it feels close to
here he'll be safe at Nekomi Tech."<<

This is definitely unlike Belldandy. First, she would more likely stay
close to Keiichi to protect him, not send him away. Second, she can protect
him better
at the temple instead of at NIT. Third, even if she HAD to send him away
for safety, she would definitely give him some kind of protection to take
with him.

"Well, Urd-chan, whatever I foresensed,

Belldandy is too respectful to refer to her sister like that. She uses
"oneesan" or jusr Urd.

If you need confirmation of the above statements, I'm sure other AMG fans
on the ML will glady provide it. Too bad I won't be around to read you
reply, I'm going to HK and won't be back until Tuesday.