Wow. Here I am with writer's block on my three current projects and you
come up with these two. I am IMPRESSED.

	Okay, on to the C&C for Saishu no Wakare.

	Waaaaaahh... ;_; I must be a masochist... I began to feel physically
hurt by it, but I couldn't stop reading. You could foresee what had
happened a little early in the story, but the outcome completely brought
down all my expectations. But really, since Namida no Okonomiyaki your
prose has become pretty astounding, even if your themes are often sad
ones. Please, you gotta consider writing Nullifier in a novel format
--or no, maybe not. I wouldn't be able to withstand _that_ scene in that
format (you know which scene I'm talking about.)
	

	As for the Predators and Klingons...

	Talk about versatility. One minute I'm reading a heart-rending sadfic
with all these emotions, and the next I find myself enthralled with a
rational, action-driven story. It's always fascinating to see the events
from a Predator's point of view, and you handled it very nicely.
Although I have to admit I found myself confused at the alien (^_^)
terminology, which I assume is how a Predator names itself and other
species, I quickly caught on to what each new word meant. I liked that,
since it shows that the story is so well-written that one doesn't need
to know _everything_ about Predators in order to understand their
language.


	There is one thing I am scornful for, though. And that's that I'll
unsubscribe for Winter break this Friday! AAAAGH! I'm gonna miss
everything that will be posted from here to mid-January!

	(BTW, you _are_ continuing to write Nullifier, arent' you? -_^)

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"He who is victorious over others	|	 The TerBril
is strong, but he who is victorious	 |	 -----------
over himself is all-powerful."		  | al709382@campus.ccm.itesm.mx
			--Confucious