At 05:39 PM 11/23/96 -0500, you wrote:

This is only a small part of a fanfic in progress.  If you can, please
give C&C direct back to author, and I'll go where I can on this.  Thanks. 


Jason Ballew



			   AN ERROR OF COMEDIES
							
	   		  A Ranma 1/2 Fanfiction
						  
		All Ranma Character Copyright Rumiko Takahashi	
				
        	  Original Character Copyright Jason Ballew
  				  
  				  
  				  
Scene:  Ucchan's
Time:  Late Evening

	The youth nodded, and responded, as if a rote phrase.  "Furinkan
koko wa doka da?" 

A now I remember. You wrote what you did quite well but I really didn't

know where you were going. Is this a son of Kuno's father, a Kuno relative.
Or just some one sent to japan to beg him to return to his rightfull place
as the god of an obscure Hawain tribe.

I allways enjoy giving feedback on new ideas but there is not much here to
get my mind on.

Give us a little idea of what you have in mind and I'll be happy to suggest
all sorts of useless plots and story ideas