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Story: 8.7  This is practically all story.  Very good if you want to see the 
characters develop in new situations without a sort of outside enemy that 
wants to smash everyone.  

Characterization 8.8  Well handled.  I especially liked the date between Ranma 
and Hiroshi.  Ranma-chans confusion and flood of emotions is well handled.  I 
look forward to seeing how the rest of the Saotome's and the Tendo's react 
when they hear the news that Ran-chan is abandoning being a guy.

Grammar. 9. Flawless.  I liked the script layout. Kinda makes me think it 
would be scary to see what you could do in book format...

Descriptions 9.5 Excellency.  Every detail is once again described. Nothing 
seems to be left out, and I found no 'shortcuts' with the descriptions.

Overall: 9.  Good work.  Keep up the good work WebDragon


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