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Story 8.9 Here we go.  We get to see the hellgate up close and we learn more 
about what is going on.   Now maybe the rest of the Knight Sabers can have 
something to do with the story.

Characterization 9 Excellent.  The characters are well represented.  I don't 
think I saw any OOC parts.

Grammar. 8.7 Nice. No mentionable errors.

Descriptions 9 You have continued to give vivid descriptions of what is going 
on throughout the story. Excellent

Fun Factor 8.5  This is a big improvement over the last parts simply because 
your past 'getting the story going'.  I look forward to Part 5.

Overall 8.82