On Sun, 29 Sep 1996 21:10:57 -0400 Michael Chen wrote:
: An Original Flavor Ranma Fanfic By Michael H. Chen
: <michael.h.chen@yale.edu>
Well, another "Ranma thinks he's really a girl" fic. The basic
idea of someone systematically switching cursed characters minds
around to their cursed form is quite neat, but unfortunately
completely underutilized.
Dr. Anim's motivation is not explained, the other affected
characters are cured almost immediately, and the ending is far too
abrupt without any sense of closure. If you made it twice as long
and added more emphasis on the effects that the mind-switch had on
the other characters, it would be pretty decent. As it stands, it
reads like a rushed episode on the anime.
Sebastian