Subject: Re-thy outward part 1/2
From: Peter Schell
Date: 10/27/1996, 11:35 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

I really liked this.
You Did not have Ranma becoming all feminine bang like that.
She is trying to live her life and move on no matter how hard.
You seem to be making a real effort to realisticaly deal with her situation. 



The only fault is I would really like to see more of this story line.
I would like to see Kentaro Convince her to at least meet her mother.

Well there are  whole lists of what I would like to see in this world.
Till Later