Odie3100 wrote:

        Okay, here's a lil' part of the first REAL chapter in this 'fic. Will it
be LEMONy or not? Only your hairdresser knows for sure.... Lemme know what
you think.

Not that I mind lemons or anything, but aren't most lemons just
pointless stories with an abundance of sex in them? The way you set this
series up with the prologue, it sounded like it was one of those fics
that strengthen Ranma and Akane's relationship. If this is going to be a
lemon with a good plot included, you're seriously going against the
grain here :P. Besides, I'm not too sure of lemons are good for your
mental health, I mean, look at Kun-Chan! (Instinctively ducks)

Ranma began to quietly yet forcefully remove the hinges from the
door. He wanted to take a bath, NOW, and he wasn't waiting around for
someone to unlock the door. He would put the hinges back on before anyone
knew what had happened.

Didn't you say something about Ranma thinking before he said/did
anything? I'm not 100% sure that Ranma would do something as stupid as
this. Especially as your prologue showed that he's matured somewhat. If
this is in order to pause him a little before entering, consider finding
something else he's gotta do instead maybe. But then again, I'm the
reader, and you're the author, so what the hell would I know?

        The towel fluttered down to the ground. Feeling a little victorious, Akane
bent over to pick it up......

(Jaymz frantically attempts to stop his nosebleed after trying to
imagine this scene)

You ARE going to make this into a lemon, aren't you?

However, lemony or not, it's still good. I like it, and I'll be
anxiously waiting for the next part!