| Subject: Re: [FFML] short fan fic |
| From: Philip Mak |
| Date: 10/19/1996, 9:01 PM |
| To: fanfic@fanfic.com |
ROTFL!!!!!!!!
That was a good one. You had me going there with the sticky white liquid
on Ranma-chan's face, I thought Nabiki was making Ranma do something
Hentai. :)
A suggestion though... you might want to run that through a spellchecker,
and also separate it into paragraphs, using quotes ("") to surround
dialogue. It makes it much easier to read if you do that.