Odie3100 wrote:

Ok, so here it is. My very first fanfic. Consider yourself forewarned.
This is more like a prologue to the series I have in mind (ie. setting up
the background, etc.) It wasn't what I had in mind when I started 2 weeks
ago, but somehow when I was done it seemed right. C&C is received with open
arms; flames are received with a shock of cold water. Let me know what you
think.

Are you sure it's your first? It's pretty good, despite the fact that
it's hard to picture Ranma being as thoughtful and mature as that. It'll
be interesting what Akane's reaction will be in the next one, as usually
she'd send him into low earth orbit with her mallet, but seeing as they
both have kinda changed.....

Anyway, I'm on the edge of my chair waiting to see what the hell happens
next. I'll be looking forward at the next part.

- Jaymz