Subject: Re: [FFML] Re: [FFML] [FF] Life's Ingredients - Thy Inward Love : Aftermath -Reply
From: Richard Lawson
Date: 9/27/1996, 10:28 AM
To: White Wolf
CC: fanfic@fanfic.com
Reply-to:
sterman@sprynet.com

White Wolf wrote:

On Fri, 27 Sep 1996 Thomas_Schauer@ITA.DOC.GOV wrote:


When I first read the story, the impression I recieved from the emotions
when Akane visited the shop, the cave scene itself, and the scene at the
 train station was that Ukyou lied to Ranma in the cave to protect his
marriage.  I could have been mistaken, as I was under considerable
strain at the time.  However, as I am not the only one who had a problem
with it, it apparantly isn't as clear as you would like to believe.
<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

Hate to post a "me too" message, but I have to say that this was the
impression I got.

Well, here's my anti-metoo letter.

I can't see how Ranma was stupid enough to think it actually happened.
Couldn't he see the very clear scene demarcations, and the obvious dream
qualities therein?

Thanks for the support, WW.  I thought it was obvious because of this...
that's why I wrote it that way.  I guess, however, I'll need to make it
more obvious in the rewrite.  <sigh>