Subject: Re: [FFML] [FF] Life's Ingredients - Thy Inward Love : Aftermath
From: Richard Lawson
Date: 9/25/1996, 10:40 AM
To: White Wolf
CC: Fanfic Mailing List <fanfic@fanfic.com>
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White Wolf wrote:

On Tue, 24 Sep 1996, Richard Lawson wrote:

Okay, here it is:  my final TIL story.  That is, my final one until I
write my sequel, which takes place twenty-five years later.

And how long till you write it?  ^_^

I'm sort of thinking after the first of the year.  I've already written
a bunch, and I have a long way to go.  I'm sort of going back and forth
between it and my original story.  And maybe a APCCGNN fanfic, as well.

So the short answer is, I don't know.

Let me know if you think of a better title, too.  I was also thinking
of, "A Spatula and a Little Love".

Both are good.  But, the story isn't about either.  It's about life's
*missing* ingredients.  Hint hint.

Hmm.  Good point.

Ok, as for the fic....  first, why did Ranma think they had sex??  I do
understand vivid dreams, but when you wake up, and the person you're with
IS STILL CLOTHED, even if you're not, wouldn't he have figured it out?
Well, it is Ranma I guess.

:)  I actually had the exact same thought.  I needed Ranma to believe he
had cheated on Akane.  I couldn't come up with anything better than what
I wrote.  If you have any better ideas, I'd like to hear them.

And that whole fight...  it sounds crazy even for Akane & Ranma.  To me at
least.

Well, you take Akane's normal angry nature, add some postpartum
depression to it, and you perhaps get this.  It was supposed to be
slightly over-the-top.  I needed strong motivation to get Ranma to run
away from Nerima.

-Richard

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