I had a problem with this for one reason:  It felt like a "dark for the 
sake of being dark" darkfic.  The "darkened" characters (or character, in 
this case) showed no redeeming qualities, which seriously bothered me.  
All Ranma was in this story was a tool of revenge.  There must be more to 
these characters than that.

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Nicholas Leifker, aka "Nightelf"
nwl9354@tam2000.tamu.edu
"He's so beautiful when he's unconscious."
-Kodachi Kuno, "Kurobara"
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