On Thu, 12 Sep 1996 01:10:25 -0400 JamesAllen said:
: Ranma 1/2
:
: For Better or for (Even) Worse [Part 1]
: Lemon Fanfic Warning! If you are offended by this sort of material, then
: don't read it! Duh!
I'm only offended by bad writing. Unfortunately "Lemon" is too
often synonymous to that.
: Startled, their attention is drawn to Ranma. They glance at each other
: and smile vacantly, then turn back to Ranma.
:
: Akane/Shampoo/Ukyou: We LOVE you RANMA!
:
: Ranma's face falls in disbelief, then he faints as all three advance with
: arms outstretched.
Waaahahaha! It's _The Night of the Walking Fiancees_!
: Tofu: Try to keep them from doing anything... <pauses, searching for the
: best word> Permanent.
:
: Genma: Permanent? Like what?
I guess he's referring to the Lemon-flavoured part of this.
It was funny. The setup was interesting (if somewhat clichee'd
with yet another Passion Spice rip-off :) and the Lemon Part was
thankfully free of "Throbbing members" and the likes. It was
interesting to see, how - even in his drugged state - Ranma
treated the three girls differently.
It's nice to see thet three working together for once. They make
a formidable team.
: In For Better or for (Even) Worse [Part 2]:
Oops, that's right, it said "Part 1" at the top. Forgot about
that.
: The morning after. Shampoo tells Cologne (almost) everything. In the
: boys showers after gym: "Hey Ranma, what's that on your back?" Kuno is
: enraged.
Heh.
: Lessons for Ranma-chan.
Duh! Of *course*! How could I forget that this is an obligatory
part of every single Ranma 1/2 lemon in existence?
I hope that part 2 will feature as much non-lemony story as this
one did. The girl's team-up is neat.
Sebastian