Well, you've definitely got Futana's character down.
It's an okay 'fic. There wasn't that much to stand it out from the
others, but there weren't any problems, either. I've read one volume of
FKC and was expecting a little more than a concession disagreement and
Futana's usual tricks.
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Nicholas Leifker, aka "Nightelf"
nwl9354@tam2000.tamu.edu
"Pronouns are so _difficult_ with these characters..."
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