Hello all! This is an alternate ending to my fanfic "Well, Well -
Part 2". I waited to write this until I was depressed again. So,
guess what happened recently? ^_^
"Alternate Well, Well - Part 2"
Ranma 1/2 Fan Fiction
"Alternate Well, Well - Part 2"
by Suds-kun (suds1964@tir.com)
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Ranma 1/2 characters are created by and copyright Rumiko Takahashi.
Published by Shogakukan Inc. and VIZ Comm.
Story copyright Shaun Schillinger.
Intended for the sole non-profit use of R.T. fans.
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Ryoga smiled. "It worked!" he said to himself. "It's time to go
home." Ryoga announced. I need to fill you in on what happened
while you two were, uhmm, away."
The three friends giggled nervously as they left the well.
The old priest frowned at them and hit Ryoga over the head with his
giant spatula.
"Ite!"
"Wake up you Idiot!" The priest screamed in a female voice.
Ryoga wondered how the priest came into the possession of Ukyo's
spatula and his hair looked like Ukyo's. How did he get Ukyo's hair?
"You BUM! Your scaring away my customers!"
Ryoga shook his head and looked up at Ukyo. He realized he had been
dreaming again. He looked around and remembered that he must have
fallen asleep in front of Ukyo's restaurant. His flight must have
ended here and then fell asleep on the street, as usual.
"Go take it somewhere else, Ryoga. I don't want people like you
around my customers!"
He slowly got up, adjusted his back pack and walked down the street.
After what he had done there last month, it was amazing that Ukyo
hadn't tried to kill him. He looked back towards Ukyo's and sighed.
Some of the damage was still visible. Ukyo must still be having a
hard time getting the business up and running. Ryoga had hoped that
he might get a handout from Ukyo. It had been so long since he had
last eaten and his back pack was starting to get heavy.
He took a quick glance at his surroundings. He didn't see anyone
following him.
Ryoga's mind was still in a whirl. It had been six months since the
deaths and the world was getting to be a darker and darker place.
First Akane, then Ranma, Genma and Nodoka, Kuno Tatewaki, Tendo Soun,
Happosai, Tofu-sensei and then Akari. Ryoga's depression was
getting steadily grosing, but he just couldn't release it. Maybe if
he'd let it build, he would just go "pop."
He glanced arround again. She wasn't following him.
When he thought of Akane, his heart felt like it would burst. "She
died in Ranma's arms, not mines. He then cures me and his father,
separating me from Akari. Ranma tricks Kuno into killing him,
the coward. Then Kodachi kills her brother and gets sent to that
prison for the criminally insane. "
He looked around. She's was no where in sight.
Then Nodoka made Genma commit seppuku and then she followed him. One
morning, Tendo Soun didn't wake up. And the old pervert got caught
by the visiting delegates looking for Cologne and Shampoo. Ryoga
shivered. "What a horrible way to die." And then there was
Tofu-sensei. Kasumi brought him a bowl of soup and when he bit off a
piece of the bowl, he accidentally cut his wrist. The idiot didn't
notice and started dancing with that stupid skeleton. He bled to
death right in front of Kasumi.
He looked around and thought he saw something in the shadows ahead.
He looked more closely. It was Akari's sumo pig, Buto. Ryoga
remembered Akari saying that Buto was now her champion sumo pig, but
never said what happened to the sumo pig that he had defeated when he
first met her.
The pig jumped out and rushed Ryoga. Ryoga barely dodged the attack.
The pig had a wild look in his eyes and was frothing at the mouth.
It made another rush and knocked Ryoga back. He countered with a
punch and kick that sent the huge pig sliding backwards. It was then
that he saw her.
Fear gripped his heart. "RUN!" Was the only thought that he had.
He tried to get up, but the pig jumped and landed on him. Ryoga
couldn't breath with the pig sitting on him. She slowly walked over
to him, a wicked knife in her hand and a sweet smile on her face.
"Ryoga-sama! I've been looking for you! Have you been lost?"
"Get away!" He screamed. His mind racing, he remembered when he had
first left her. She had made him breakfast. It was bacon and eggs.
He asked her where her champion sumo pig was and she had said that he
was "near by." And with that she threw a glass of water in his
face. She then tried to stab him with a knife, but stopped when she
saw he didn't turn into a pig. He's been running ever since.
"Buto, he needs to be stunned before I make the cut. After that we
can take back home to be slaughtered." Akari's innocent smile moved
the huge pig to punch Ryoga in the head.
The hoof came down at his face and then there was blackness. Ryoga
could see Akane and Ranma waving to him to catch up. Ryoga smiled
and ran to his friends.
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Nabiki smiled. Her plan had worked. Everyone was out of the way and
she was the only one left. The insurance policies had paid nicely,
the sale of the dojo was very profitable and the payment from the
Kuno foundation was icing on the cake. Onnechan was a ward of the
state and finally out of her hair. There was no one around to tell
her what to do or prevent her from being a success.
"People will respect the name of Tendo Nabiki!" she shouted to no
one.
She looked out the office window at the city below her and laughed.
It was the first time she had really laughed since her father made
that engagement announcement. "They ALL got what they deserved."
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Well? What do you think? C & C are always welcome.
About Ukyo. I like Ukyo, so I made sure she didn't die. ;)
Oh, those funny looking words:
Ow = Ite
Older Sister = Onnechan
Suicide = Seppuku
How did I type this Up? Well....
1. Thought up story
2. Typed story into Word 6.0
3. Spell checked
4. Proof read
5. Saved as text file
6. Opened text file in Pro Write 3.0 **New Step**
7. Reformated to 70 characters a line **New Step**
8. Saved as text file **New Step**
9. Sent file as attachement via Netscape Mail
Questions!
My ISP doesn't list rec.arts.anime.creative on it's news server. Is
there anything special that I or my ISP needs to do to access raac?
I sure would like to post my final versions of The Second and Well,
Well.
I am setting up a web page at geocities.com Has anyone had any
experience with them and fanfics? Any suggestions on setting up a
web page would deffinately be appreciated!
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suds-kun (Shaun Schillinger)
suds1964@tir.com
"THIS time, we didn't forget the graaavy!" Cat & Mouse to Dog