On Aug 30, 1996 04:32:22, '"Doug Murphy" <Draxon-X@msn.com>' wrote: 
 

The Mihoshi Incident  
A Tenchi Muyo/Star Trek crossover  

I don't know all that much about Tenchi Muyo, so I really can't comment on

that, however the Star Trek part is well handled. All of the characters

were  

more or less in character. If you want to lengthen this part a bit you

could  

always mention the displays in the back, some ensigns doing some sort of  
research, or just about anything. 

 
I should have mentioned it when I posted it, but "The Mihoshi Incident" is
but a 
rough draft. I can always change things if it'll make it a better 'fic. 
 

Just thought I'd let you know I read it, 

Draxon-X 

 
I thank you for the comments. I'll keep them in mind.... 
 
Derek 
 
<damn..... already got 3 comments on it. That's a record for me>