| Subject: Re: [FFML] [fanfic] The Mihoshi Incident, chapter 1 |
| From: doppleganger@usa.pipeline.com (Derek Sherman) |
| Date: 8/26/1996, 5:59 AM |
| To: fanfic@fanfic.com |
On Aug 25, 1996 19:35:06, '"Ranma Al'Thor" <ranma@falcon.cc.ukans.edu>' wrote:
Nice start :) I suggest working the word "strange emissions" into it somewhere...all Star Trek stories either have that phrase, or some variant of it :)
Oh, yes.... strange emmissions, and the <insert word here>-ions that must be utilized to solve almost any problem... dimbulbions, perhaps? ^_^ Thanks for the support! Derek