Subject: Re: [FFML] [fanfic] The Mihoshi Incident, chapter 1
From: doppleganger@usa.pipeline.com (Derek Sherman)
Date: 8/26/1996, 5:59 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

On Aug 25, 1996 19:35:06, '"Ranma Al'Thor" <ranma@falcon.cc.ukans.edu>'
wrote: 
 
Nice start :)  I suggest working the word "strange emissions" into it  
somewhere...all Star Trek stories either have that phrase, or some  
variant of it :) 
 
Oh, yes.... strange emmissions, and the <insert word here>-ions that must
be utilized to solve almost any problem... dimbulbions, perhaps? ^_^ 
 
Thanks for the support! 
 
Derek