None other than the author of Twisted Path could think of something this 
... er ... power-loaded/humorous/strange :)
Quite well executed, and plot did not have any major leaks.  I take it 
that you like elves ;)  However, there are quite a few 
grammatical (run-on sentences and the like) / punctuation irregularities 
(missing commas, etc).  About the only problem that I have with this 
story is the same that I have with Twisted Path ... _It's NOT finished!_
You like to torture us with long delays, no?

    \/\/ /___ /    ___             _       \/     v                  _  
     \/ /<')_><   <')_><        \ / \       o    /'>               ><'>  
      \/ / \/  ___              )(=(')       \/V #                  _  
       \/ \/  <')_><            / \_/         \/ \/   V ._. V     ><'>  VVV
        \\/            \\|//                   \ /     <(_)>             V
-,V-.;'./^\-='+-""+o-_#./^\_.='-=O'-=.w-.'~.*-.='-';=.'^^ ^^'O=.+-n.[-=*_'.,
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