On Tue, 13 Aug 1996, David Myers wrote:
A Girls Challenge
by David Myers
She falls to the ground. Ranma leaps to her side and then falls back in
shock. Kodachi is in a hideous state. Her chin and lip have been
highlighted using mascara to give the impression that she has a moustache
and beard. Her lipstick has been applied badly, giving her the impression
of having a bloody lip. The bow in her hair is cut to shreds and her hair
itself has been cut badly. One of her eyebrows has been shaved off, and
eye liner has been badly applied giving her a bloodshot eye. Her nose has
been pierced and a small padlock inserted in the pierce, her clothes are
in tatters and her normally manicured nails have been cut by what looks like
a carving knife. Even though she has no physical injuries she looks
absolutely hideous.
Excuse me? A nose piercing is no physical injury?
End of Chapter 2
Well Gee wiz that didn't take too long at all. Remember again if you write
to me I'm more likely to finish this quicker.
I sure hope so. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Very good whackyness,
particularly in the Tendou Family scenes.
Anyway write to me with comments criticisms you
may have and it will only make the story better. Stay tuned for the next
chapter which should be just down right silly!
Apart from a few strange spellings and the one above, no criticisms.
Go on, write the next part.
Sebastian