At 08:36 PM 8/8/96 -0700, you wrote:

Hold On              <-- what does THIS have to do with anything? :)
by: Jeff Rutsch

beautiful.  i got this picture of these two people trying to
do something the way it was meant to be done and unable to do
it because they didn't really understand what they were doing
it for.  you know...loving acts are kind of an...act to them
rather than a natural thing.

the end: well, not quite what I expected.  was this a reference
to the man's impotence or was it because the woman just couldn't
turn him on?  or do you just not know? =)

    This was *going* to contain my first lemon scene, but
conventional lemon scenes are so blech to read, and what I was doing
was so surreal, that I cut it.  

Yah.  so...make it unconventional.  =)  although it couldn't just
be unconventional sex, because that would be conventional.

signed, PhoneyNT

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