On Sat, 3 Aug 1996 17:30:05 -0400 Mi-chan said:

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:                                 "Sabishisa"
:                                ("Loneliness")
:
:                       An Original Ranma � Fan Fiction
:                                     by
:                                   Mi-chan
:                              (Michelle Mista)
:                          Washuu-chan's #1 Student!
:                  (formerly mi-chan@ix.netcom.com)
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Very well done.  The theme is not as *completely* unexplored, as
you thought it is, but your story is certainly original and merits
reading.  Solid characterization, neat writing style - simply
good;  Write more.


:      Some might say I chickened out by making this whole story a
: dream sequence.... C'mon, do you really think I'd kill my
: favorite character? ^_^ No way!

It *was* a cop-out, but as such it was written well enough not to
freak the reader out.  At least, Ranma didn't find Bobby showering
in the bathroom, or something. :)

Heck, I'm *glad* it turned out to be just a dream.  (I take all
these fics a little personal, you know?)


:     Last but definately _not_ least, I'd like to thank my two pre-readers,
: Mario "Lee-kun" Bansen III and Stephanie A. Gonzales for their input
: and help...!

I can't say I recognize the first name, but Stephanie has posted
some very romantic Ranma fics of her own.


: Mi-chan
: (currently Citzen_Al@aol.com)
: (I HATE AOL.)

Who doesn't?


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