On Wed, 7 Aug 1996, Martin Bennett wrote:

Okay... This is one of my patented P-word sillyfics... Must be taken with a
grain of salt.

Not *too* silly.  It *could* have happened this way.

Kunou stopped and smiled evilly, "What, indeed! After you used your foul 
magic to transport me to China, I fought many foes but did not fall! Now is 
the time for payment, Fiend!" 

Not even into the spring of drowned donkey?  Pity.

Ranma and Akane went up to class and opened the door. Inside, Miss Hinako 
turned to face them, "Ah, Mr. Saotome! Miss Tendou! About your behavior over 
the last few days..."

Ranma and Akane looked at each other in horror...

"AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHGGGHHH!!!!!"

Hah!  *Great* way to end the fic.

I've only got one gripe:  How come Ranma and Akane behave so differently 
after Akane's wish?  They were in love all the time!  You could, of 
course, say that the wish didn't change anything, but only gave them an 
excuse to *show* their love - after all, they were able to continue after 
the wishes had been undone.


Sebastian
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