OK, first of all, speaking as myself, I will say that you've
written a very nice, chilling horror fanfic.  Ryouga is nicely
done, considering the style.  Good stuff.

Now, pardon me while I become Protector of Akari, Ryouga's One
True Love, in the Church of Ryouga.

<rustle>

<Akari comes out on Katsunishi and proceedcs to stomp Chris into
the ground over and over>

HOW DARE YOU IMPLY THAT AKARI'S LOVE IS ANYTHING BUT PURE!!!???

Sorry.  Had to be done.

--Sean Gaffney
--Akari fan...