On Wed, 31 Jul 1996, Chan Wei Lik wrote:

You got the Mouko Takabishya wrong. Its not fired that way. The source 
of its ki comes from the user's confidence and arrogance. Furthermore, 
it was developed by Ranma.

Well, I was just thinking that he was getting confidence from his 
ancestors. Hey, you never know what Cologne learns from Ranma.

Glad to hear you're finally getting to the AMG part of this fic. I was 
beginning to think you had forgotten about them. You just kept letting 
the fic drag on and on. You've really got to do something about your 
prose. Gives me the feeling of someone dragging his feet.

Yeah, I felt like it was dragging too. Did'nt really plan to put so much 
in, but I had to built it up somehow. Anyway, things will get a littl 
more interesting from now on.
                            
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