Well, here we go wioth yet another version of one of my early fanfics...
I really want C&C from this, And Why the hell didn't I get any from
Ranma:Dark Empire or my final copy of Enter: Shiro? Huh?
Well, I'm finally getting to the fic, well, now...
Ok, here's the first part of the new, reworked Sailor Moon Heretics
series.
It follows the prologue, so If you haven't read it, go find it...
Please, give me feedback, for some reason, all my last fics haven't
gotten any C&C...so please, please send me feedback!
that to : walker@mail.accent.net
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Sailor Moon Heretics
Episode 1.
A new Foe! The Dark Pope and his Black Cardinals Strike!
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By
Geoffrey "The Tyrant Pax" Walker
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Just behind the moon, the massive shape of the Black Cathedral moves
amazingly fast for something that size. It's Rosary window, glowing with it
read light.
Somewhere, deep beneath the Pentagon, a panic sets though.
"Ah, sir, I think you should look at this..." said a operator, who
sits wide eyed, staring at his radar screen.
"What is it?" says a General, coming over to the operator.
"Look." the operator points to a very large blip on the screen.
"It....is...huge! But is it moving?"
"No. It's stationary.."
"Then...then, this will stay quiet, but if it moves, I want to be
notified."
"Yes sir."
A world away, the girls sit in Rei's room, going over their
finally notes for their final exams.
"What? Isn't this right?" says Makoto, raising a book marked "English"
so that Ami can see.
"No, it says 'The nife is sharp.'. That's wrong." says Ami, matter
of factually.
"But, that's how it's said...."
"But it's not spelt like that, there's a K before the n, it's
k-n-i-f-e."
"Oh, what a stupid language." Makoto slumps down.
"Heh, I'm gonna ace the English exam." says Usagi, pounding on her
chest.
"I'm not to sure....'The turkey is a good bird to walk?'". said
Minako.
Usagi gets the sweatdrop, and Looks at her book.
"It should say eat! Eat...that's what I meant..." Usagi says,
defensively.
"As if...well, I have my Geography exam tomorrow, and I can't
remember all the European countries, or the NAFTA ones..." said Minako, looking
at an atlas.
"What ones do you know?" said Ami.
"Um, with NAFTA, I know America, but I know there's two others,
and with Europe, I know, England, Spain, France, Scotland, Ireland, Northern
Ireland, Germany, Switzerland..." Minako begins to list of most of the
European nations.
"You forgot Bosnia and Denmark." said Ami.
"Thanks."
Rei is off in a world of her own...she see Sailor moon, standing
on a dais, looking extremely evil, but in Rei's mind the words "kill me"
keep echoing...
"Rei-chan!" Yells Usagi at Rei, trying to get her attention.
"What is it?" Rei asks but in a detached voice.
"How are you coming? you have History tomorrow, don't you?" asked
Usagi.
"Yes, but it's on world history, from the second world war to
the fall of the communist west. Not to difficult, not as bad as all that
Greek and Roman stuff from last semester." said Rei, still quite out of it.
"I think Rei's mind has turned to mush, lets go out and get something
to eat." said Usagi.
"I guess we could spare a hour." said Ami.
"It sounds good, lets go!" said Usagi, getting up.
Somewhere else, at Setsuna's house, she sits on the floor, watching
Chibi-Hotoru practice her Kanji's.
"Is this good?" said Hotoru, holding up a page with the kanji Ki on
it.
"Yes, very good." said Setsuna.
"Do you ever give the kid and time to play." said Haruka, who comes
in. She's wearing a relatively feminine blouse and a pair of white pants.
"She deserves to have the very best education." said Setsuna.
"Well, yes, but that not all she deserve, she deserves to have some
fun, even Ami gets to have some fun."
"I guess so, If you want to you can take her in to town."
"Ohhh, can I!" Said Hotoru, getting up.
"If you want to go, I'll take you." said Haruka.
" Yay! " Hotoru jumps up and down.
" Well, come on, but change." said Haruka.
Hotoru picks at the smock she is wearing. " Really, ok, I'll be right
back." Hotoru runs off.
" What are you going to do?" asks Setsuna.
" I though I'd take her to the toy stores. She needs something to
play with. Something mindless."
" You'll rot her brain."
" Come on, you and Michiru, you guys." Haruka leaves.
Setsuna gets up off the floor and sits down on the chesterfield.
" Now, I'm all alone." she said.
" No you're not." said a voice.
Setsuna turns around, but sees nothing.
" Ah!" Usagi exclaims as she finishes her drink.
" That's your third one." said Rei.
" So!?"
" Oh well."
Ami is reading a book.
" Must you do that, it unnerves me." said Minako.
" But..." Ami protests as Makoto takes the book form her hands.
" Just stop this for an hour." she said.
" Very well." says Ami, reluctantly.
They begin to have a started conversation, involving the usual stuff,
when Mamoru enters the cafe.
" Mamo-chan!" Usagi exclaims as she leaps up and embraces him.
" Hello Usako." he says.
" What are you doing here?" asked Rei.
" I, was just in the neighborhood, and I saw you guys in here, I thought
I'd say hello."
" Well, you've done that." said Rei.
" I guess so." he says. Usagi peels herself off of him and sits back down.
" Well, I have to get going. I'll see you around." he says, and walks
off.
" He's in quite a hurry." said Makoto.
" He must have to meet someone." said Ami.
"I bet it's another girl." said Rei.
"Liar!" said Usagi.
"Are you sure?" Rei smiles a wolfish grin.
Just then, Haruka and Hotoru walk in.
"Well, well, look who's loitering." said Haruka. She's holding a rather
large stuffed panda in one arm, and Hotoru's hand in the other.
"Hello!" Hotoru says cheerfully when she see's the girls. She lets go
of Haruka's hand and runs over to Ami, who picks her up, and puts her in
her lap.
"Hi, Haruka-san." said Usagi.
"I saw Mamoru, he was in quite a hurry, you do know that Michiru asked
him to pick her up at the train station today, when she came back from
Chiba."
said Haruka.
"Why would she do that?" asked Makoto.
"I don't know. Maybe she prefers his driving over mine?" Haruka says.
Hotoru takes the book that Ami was reading from were Makoto had put it,
and began to read it.
"Kafka?" Haruka says, reading the books cover. "Setsuna and Michiru have
no sense of fun."
"But I like Kafka." said Hotoru.
"Great, hey, do you want something fun to read?" said Haruka.
Hotoru looks up. "Like what?"
"I know! Some Manga's!" said Usagi.
"Mama-san says they'll rot your brain." said Hotoru.
"I've told that to the others for a while." said Ami, while the others
get the sweatdrop.
"That's only if that all you read. A few wont hurt you." Haruka scans the
stores across the street, and spies a bookstore with a large rack of Manga's
out front. "Hmmm, I don't remember that store being there before" Haruka says
to herself. "I'll be right back." she Turns and walks out, but first, she
gives the panda to Usagi.
"How are you doing?" asks Makoto to Hotoru.
"I'm ok, but the storm and they kept me awake most of the night."
"Oh."
In the Black Cathedral, Lezinite and Hessenite stand before Necrolite's
throne.
"M'lord, what is our mission on this world?" asks Hessenite.
"To bring the black fleet into the universe, we need to gather as much
energy from the ley line nexuses on this world as we can, and we also need
to replenish the power of the Cathedral, for the destruction of Tusi and
the fold operation took up most of our reserves. Now, go forth, and take
a Minor Horror, for I doubt the weapons of this world will be of any matter to
us...." said Necrolite.
"But, Do not forget, they are supposedly here, and the defeated the Dark
Kingdom, Black Moon Family, and even Pharaoh Ninety." said Lezinite.
"I defeated Pharaoh Ninety! They are no match for the might of the Chaos
Church! Now go!" Necrolite booms, and Lezinite and Hessenite disappear.
Back on earth, Lezinite and Hessenite appear. Their uniforms are
replaced with more standard clothes. Hessenite wears a pair of pants and a
long-sleeve, plaid shirt. Lezinite wears a dress that leaves little to the
imagination.
"This is that place?" said Hessenite.
"Yes, a powerful nexus is here." said Lezinite.
"Shall we enter?" said Hessenite.
"Why not?"
"Ladies first." said Hessenite.
"If you insist." Lezinite said.
The walk into the cafe. They look around, and Lezinite spies Makoto,
and stops.
"Um, I'm....going to go to the bathroom now." Lezinite says.
"You should of gone before we left." Hessenite says with a smile.
"Yea, what ever." Lezinite says, still looking at Makoto.
"Oh great, I have to go." said Makoto, getting up from the table.
"Don't be too long, we've been here to long already." said Ami.
"Don't listen to her." said Haruka, who had retained with a hand full
of various mangas. Hotoru was already engrossed in a copy of Rayearth.
"You don't have to worry, you're already in high school." said Ami.
"Hmmm, you to have a point there..." Haruka said.
In the bathroom, Lezinite waited until the last person had left,
before bringing forth the terror bulb. She places the thing that looks like
a small bright green beet, with small, writhing tentacles on the bottom. She
lays it upon the floor, and puts her hand on it.
"Chaos Unnatural Growth!" she yells, and a blue nimbus surrounds the
bulb and it almost instantly grows into a large, masculine figure, with black
skin, that seemed to be made of PVC and long blades at the forearms.
Just then, Makoto walks in.
Very quickly, Lezinite shoves the terror into a stall, and smiles at
Makoto, and begins to approach.
"Hi." Lezinite says. She puts her arm between Makoto and the door.
"Um, hi." says Makoto, uneasy.
Lezinite moves even closer.
"What's your name?"
"Um, Makoto."
"What a lovely name.
Lezinite brushes her finger along Makoto's cheek. Makoto tries to pull
away, but can't. Lezinite runs her fingers along various parts of Makoto.
"You are strong, yet, very pretty." said Lezinite.
Makoto gathered all of her will, and was able to push herself away
from Lezinite, but just as she's about to leave, Hessenite appears.
"What is....Oh, distracted again. Terror! Come!" Hessenite says,
and the terror bursts forth from the stall.
"Yaaaaaaaa!" Makoto yells, as she throws open the door and runs out,
perused by the terror.
"EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEKKKKK! What's that!" screams Usagi.
"Ah! Haruka!" Yells Hotoru as the terror takes a swing at Haruka, who
successfully dodges it's attack. She runs over and grabs Hotoru.
"I'll take her to safety, you know what you need to do!" said Haruka,
and she leaps through one of the windows, but lucky for her, it was open.
"I don't wanna fight it!" Usagi whines.
"Shut up!" Rei slaps her on the back of the head.
"Ouch! Oh, I'll do it...."
They all go throughout their Transformations and usual spiels. The
terror growls and attacks. It's first target is Mercury, who dodges that
attack. The blow shatters a table, sending a half eaten chocolate sundae
flying through the air, and directly into Jupiter's Face.
"Ah! I'm all sticky!" Jupiter protests, as she wipes the chocolate and
ice cream from her face. Unfortunately, she cannot see the terrors arm come
down, so she unable to stop it from hitting her. Fortunately, the flat of the
blade struck her full in the stomach sending her flying through a window, but
this one was closed.
"Jupiter!" yells Venus. " Venus Love-me chain!" the chain of little
hearts encircles the terror.
"Grrrrrowl!" the terror growls in anger, as it is confined by the
chain.
"Sailor Moon now!" says Venus.
"Ok." Moon nods. "Moon Spiral Heart attack!" She goes through that
sequence and destroys the terror.
"Yes!" Moon thrusts her fist into the air.
"What a wimpy monster." says Mars.
"They are much more effective in a large group." said Lezinite's
voice.
The senshi turn to see Lezinite and Hessenite floating in the air.
"Who are you!?" asks Mercury.
"We are the supreme generals of the forces of the Chaos Church, the
black cardinals; Hessenite..." Lezinite points to Hessenite.
" ...and Lezinite." Hessenite points to Lezinite.
Jupiter walks back into the cafe.
"Beware, this was merle a probe into your planets defensive." said
Hessenite.
"And we'll be back with more powerful terrors." said Lezinite.
"What do you want?" asked Mars.
"We have wasted enough time." and the black cardinals disappear.
"It looks like we have a new mission before us." said Mercury.
"Oh great." said Moon.
*END*
There we go, the end of the first part of my new, revamped Sailor
Moon Heretics.
Please, please send me feedback at walker@mail.accent.net.
I hope to have the next part out soon.
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