At 04:20 PM 7/14/96 -0400, you wrote:

Allo! I mostly did this bit to get my mind of TP for a bit so my mind
would be fresh when I started on it again. Either that or else not write.
I included the seed idea and what I've don of the Puck story.
Always looking for people willing to write their own, I'm used to powerful
chars, but I'd like the normal, low, medium, abilities reflected too. ;)
C+C welcome!

Great start to the story..   The only thing I noticed was that it seemed
like the ones girls name was Cindy and then changed to Cathy...  Only other
thing was that a few sentinces seemed to have words missing from them...
I'll go back over it and list specific things.

Tom


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