Well here is my first post to the FFML.  This is a story I started a little
while back but haven't worked on in a while.  I would like to know what the
loyal members of the FFML think.  Should I kill it now or finish it?  Please
tell me!

p.s. I apologize in advance if the story doesn't get through my computer is
having probs sending out attachements.  Could someone tell me if they get
the story since I don't get stories I post.

Well, Zen's copy begins like this...


had he denied her those words?  For that matter why had he denied them to
himself?  He had always loved her.  Sure she had her rough spots, she had a
hair trigger temper, was always hitting him




and ends like this:

realization he lept from the yard and ran off, unable to face Ranma any
longer.  Unable to face what he had almost done.  The next few days had
gone by slowly and painfully.  Ranma had been admitted to Dr. Tofu's clinic
and was recovering from his wounds.



ater after Akane.  Again just as she was about to grab
Akane's



As long as those are correct, Zen got it, but with a lot of garbage before
and after....

Zen-

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