That is truly a sad sight... all that effort into a fanfic, and it all 
gets blown away like the ashes from a campfire...

I always get depressed when someone writes something pitiful( ie this 
last part), then blames the reason for it on someone else. Sure someone 
said "gee! this isn't good," but it shouldn't hit that hard.

For my Shaolin 1/2, I recieved much "drop it quickly" messages, and I am 
currently rewriting it. 

Spending that much time on a storyline, then ending it like that, Jack, 
is a crime. It _pains_ me to see effort wasted like that. 

	Thomas Hamill