Hmm....bizarre. But then again, all of your stuff seems to be bizarre. :)

I'm not really into LomanFics.....couldn't stand Dropping Anchor, despite
the skill with which it was written. On the other hand, I love the
wonderfully surreal way that the story is layered...Everything's normal,
if gloomy, on the surface, but read between the lines and...

   The average Rutsch fic makes Dali look like Norman Rockwell, and this
is no exception. Polish it, and it'll be more than presentable.

   I'd give C&C, but I'm not sure what's not right for the fic and what's
just too deep for me to percive.

- Mike of No Particular Title or Handle
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