Here it is, the final installment of my series. It is *very* rough - I
didn't even reread it after I finished. I just need to get it away from
me. :)
I thought it was very good, anyway, even if it is a draft... (But then,
I don't check grammar and spelling much, anyway.)
That's not to say I don't want your C&C. On the contrary, I would very
much appreciate it. I cover a lot of ground in this piece, and I want
your perspectives.
Don't really know what C&C to give on this one. It was very good.
This is very long - I hope not too long. Let me know if it gets cut off
or anything. The last line should read "THE END".
I got it all. ^_^
I now know why people have a hard time finishing series. This took a
lot out of me. I plan to take a little rest, then rework the whole
series. I've had many excellent suggestions along the way, things I
need to work into the chapters. I plan to post the whole thing, along
with the appropriate credits to people on this ML, to the remailer in a
couple of weeks. I am also going to put it on my home page. And to
RAAC, if Megazone ever returns (which seems unlikely).
Gambatte! (Someone needs to take over Megazone's job... -_- )
I do want to thank everyone for their kind words and great feedback. I
don't know if any more fanfics are in my future. Maybe, but it's hard
to think creative thoughts right now. :)
Dou itashimashite. ^_^
Anyhoo, as I said, I really, really want to know what you think. What
works, what doesn't work? Let me know.
The whole wedding bit was good... Even if you didn't get any lemon in
it. ^_~
Kun-chan...