Subject: Re: [FFML] [FF] Thy Inward Love, Part 10 - One Part of Two
From: Caroline Ann Seawright
Date: 6/22/1996, 11:37 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

Here it is, the final installment of my series.  It is *very* rough - I
didn't even reread it after I finished.  I just need to get it away from
me.  :)

I thought it was very good, anyway, even if it is a draft... (But then,
I don't check grammar and spelling much, anyway.)

That's not to say I don't want your C&C.  On the contrary, I would very 
much appreciate it.  I cover a lot of ground in this piece, and I want 
your perspectives.

Don't really know what C&C to give on this one. It was very good.

This is very long - I hope not too long.  Let me know if it gets cut off 
or anything.  The last line should read "THE END".

I got it all. ^_^

I now know why people have a hard time finishing series.  This took a 
lot out of me.  I plan to take a little rest, then rework the whole 
series.  I've had many excellent suggestions along the way, things I 
need to work into the chapters.  I plan to post the whole thing, along 
with the appropriate credits to people on this ML, to the remailer in a 
couple of weeks.  I am also going to put it on my home page.  And to 
RAAC, if Megazone ever returns (which seems unlikely).

Gambatte! (Someone needs to take over Megazone's job... -_- )

I do want to thank everyone for their kind words and great feedback.  I 
don't know if any more fanfics are in my future.  Maybe, but it's hard 
to think creative thoughts right now.  :)

Dou itashimashite. ^_^

Anyhoo, as I said, I really, really want to know what you think.  What 
works, what doesn't work?  Let me know.

The whole wedding bit was good... Even if you didn't get any lemon in
it. ^_~

Kun-chan...