I like the story so far.  As far what's next, I suppose the logical
thing will be for Ranma and Akane to go home.  The question, obviously, is
how.
I don't really have any good idea on that.  Ranma and Akane might just
eventually find their way to Florida.  Of course, for humor effect you can
always have Ryouga coming from nowhere and asking for direction to
Florida!  It
really depends on how you want the story to develop, I supppose.  Good story.
The story is too early for me to seriously comment it

Funny- Zen thought he might have been going for the "Home Alone in New
York" sort of thing...  Plotline sounds real close now - all you need is a
villain that wants to get them, and an abandoned area where they can fight
without attracting *too* much police Attention.  Or perhaps they bust up a
street gang or something.  Zen likes the Ryouga idea... is perfectly in
character.  At any rate, Scott, keep writing.  Your fics get better with
every new one.

As for Chrono Trigger 1/2, Zen has never even *heard* of Chrono Trigger, so
any intelligent comment would be difficult.  At present, Zen sees only the
CT team mopping the Dojo with Team Ranma, but no *whys*, so Zen does not
really know what is going on...  Zen is waiting for the next part to find
out more!

Doumo.

Zen-


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