Very nice close. And here I was just getting ready to mail off a
fla...er...reminder to you asking to finish it. :)

   
   ^_^

   The horror scene in the shadows was a very, very nasty piece of 

work.

Very. You are a truly sick person who needs lots and lots of 

treatment. It

makes me rather more eaer to see that Atmosfear fic of yours than I 

was. >    Crusifiying Kasumi....gah....

    Tell me about it. The images just came so naturally, I was 
scaring myself. I'm not usually that graphic when I write. As for 
Kasumi, it just appealed to that sadistic side of me to see someone 
so sweet and nice as Kasumi dying in a very horrific fashion.
    Atmosfear isn't going to be quite as dark as this though...

   Am I the only one who found the line; "Outside, a dog barked" rather
amusing?

    How so? 

   The end left me....I dunno....feeling a bit dissappointed. Thee 

wasn't

any real closure. And yeah, I know, the thrid fic is yet to come...

                                          ^^^^^ 
    Actually, the THIRD fic is yet to come. ^_^ But I have to agree 
with you on the ending. I just didn't know how to end it any other 
way. I needed the Ki-Spirit to survive for the third part, but in 
doing so, I created a problem in my overall goal for the trilogy, 
which was to make each part act as a stand alone fic. I'll take any 
suggestions anyone has...

- Mike of No Particular Title or Handle

                                    ---Erin 2.5
                                    
      "This just goes to show that brain damage can be fun!"
      
                    ---Shadoe Stevens, "Shadoevision"